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How one sentence turned a boring ad into a six-figure YouTube winner 💵

Hey there, fellow advertisers!

Let's dive into this ad that's been dominating YouTube lately. Our focus will be (as always), but maybe this time in particular, the copy. You may ask me why, and while copy is vital in every YouTube ad, it's particularly interesting when the ad is done in a very simple production style. 

Author:
Alex Simic, Creative Director

We're talking about a campaign that's spent almost $700k in the past 30 days, all with a simple VO and B-roll setup. It's a masterclass in direct response copywriting, and there's a lot we can learn from it.

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First off, that hook: "Never sue the other driver after a car accident."

It's unexpected, challenging conventional wisdom right out of the gate. This immediately grabs attention and sets the stage for their alternative solution. What stands out to me is the fact that most competitor ads haven't really used this angle to grab the audience's attention. This is very important, especially when the market is saturated.

When you think about it, that hook is not really all that different structurally and stylistically, but it does use a new ‘thought', and therefore feels very fresh to the audience, which is the key after all.

The ad wastes no time in presenting its value proposition: bigger payouts without court appearances or upfront fees. It's addressing common pain points associated with accident claims head-on.

What's clever is how they broaden their audience. By mentioning "even as a passenger," they're casting a wider net, making sure more viewers see themselves as potential beneficiaries.

The "2025 compensation program" branding is smart. It gives their offer an official-sounding name, lending credibility to their service.

Now, let's talk about how they use social proof. Josh's story isn't just a vague testimonial; it's a specific example with real numbers. $4,000 from insurance versus over $100,000 through their program? That's the kind of contrast that makes people sit up and take notice.

They've also done a good job of simplifying the process. Four multiple-choice questions that take 30 seconds? That sounds a lot less daunting than a lengthy application process.

The risk reversal is clear: "You don't pay a cent unless you win." This removes a major barrier to action, making it easier for viewers to take the next step.

Throughout the ad, they're painting a picture of how this could change the viewer's life. Paying off bills, covering rent with ease - it's not just about the money, it's about what that money could do for you.

They're also creating doubt in the status quo. By suggesting that insurance companies hope you never check what you're truly owed, they're positioning their service as revealing hidden information.

The repeated calls to action, each with a slightly different angle, keep the viewer focused on the next step. And the sense of urgency - "Time is running out" - gives people a reason to act now, not later.

What's particularly interesting is how they navigate compliance issues. They're making some bold claims, but always with a bit of wiggle room. It's not guaranteed money; it's what you "could" be owed.

So, what can we learn from this?

  1. Start strong: Challenge assumptions and grab attention immediately.

  2. Be clear about benefits: Make it obvious what's in it for the viewer.

  3. Use specific examples: Real numbers are more powerful than vague promises.

  4. Simplify the process: Make taking action seem easy and low-risk.

  5. Create urgency: Give people a reason to act now.

  6. Address objections: Anticipate what might hold people back and tackle it head-on.

  7. Paint a picture: Help viewers imagine how their life could change.

  8. Repeat the call to action: Don't be shy about asking for the click multiple times.

This ad proves (yet again) you don't need fancy production to create an effective YouTube campaign. What you need is a message that speaks directly to your audience's pain points, presents a compelling solution, and gives them every reason to take action right away.

So take notes and get going with a new batch of creatives to test for your offer! And if you need help, we're always here 🙂


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Alex Simic, Creative Director

Alex Simic is the person responsible for all creative work that stands behind Inceptly since stepping into his role in 2022. He comes from the role of the Media Buying Team Lead and Strategist behind some of Inceptly’s biggest successes. He has collaborated with the biggest names in the Direct Response industry, whether as a Senior Account Manager & Media Buyer or Creative Director. His main goal is bridging the gap between Media Buying and Creative, ensuring that the videos Inceptly produces are data-based and giving our clients the best chance at achieving success.

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